You may be ninety nine, but I think you're stiill fine
As pretty and loving as ever
Lucky am I that you are mine
You may be ninety nine, but I think you're still fine
For years you have made my life divine
I promise I will leave you never
You may be ninety nine, butI think you're still fine
As pretty and loving as ever
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Prompt.You may be ninety nine, but I think you're still fine
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A contest entry
- PIF- Quickie :] by Jasmine Rayne.
700 points, ended August 26, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is such a cute write. ^_^ I love the form you wrote in and the rhyme scheme.
"I promise I will leave you never
You may be ninety nine, butI think you're still fine
As pretty and loving as ever"
Such a heart-warming ending.
Beautiful. [you should space the "but" and "I" 
] Thanks for your wonderful entry. ^_^ 
-Lily♥
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