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Who Says we're over?

So give up
And let go
Its easier said than done

Its the guilty pleasure
In the sunny weather
Checking you out
Whether you were mine or not
Why couldn't you be the one?

All the nights I spent alone
Calling your phone
Looking through your window
But you were never home

I remember those times you had
We laughed We talked
I'm sorry I made you mad
By allowing that night
You to reveal who you are
Also in that car
I revealed who I was as well

Its the guilty pleasure
In the sunny weather
Checking you out
Whether you were mine or not
Why couldn't you be the one?

"I love you
Who you are
Who you were
Who you strive to be
I can't help but thinik
You're avoiding me
I cannot let you go
Why can't you understand that?"

Author notes

written during basic
yes it was supposed to sound like a stalker
No this is not based of personal experiences

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  • i rock this world
    September 3, 2008
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    love it. very sweat. very good.


  • SaMmYBabY
    September 2, 2008
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    I love it It is dreepy in a realy good way tho GreatWrite

  • ScreamingConfession
    August 27, 2008
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    That sent chills up my spine. Fabulious write. Extremely creepy.


  • Artemis De Winter
    August 25, 2008

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    haha, that was good, and also creepy (in a good way), cuz it's from the view of a stalker... but, i also love the last stanza; "I cannot let you go. Why can't you understand that?"