I'm dying to be in your arms tonight
I know our lives will change
This was a way to start anew
Because I knew we neeeded it
Now I just wanna hear you say
"Son I love you"
I am homesick
With my family not knowing where I am
There's no way they miss me more
Than I do them
I just want him to hear me say
"I regret not saying this before
I need you, more than you need me
Its why I miss you so much
Father"
Father,
Your disapline through fear shapped me
I was once intimidated and scared
As there were days I dared
To test you, I did wrong
But I learned my leason with a swift fist
And the only thing that made me feel better
Was knowing that someday I'd leave
Now I have and the days are exponentially difficult
Now that I need you
You are not there
When I was young
I'm sure there was a song you sung to me
Well, now I sing to myself
And its not the same
I miss you dad
I love you dad
Author notes
written during basic training
In a list
A contest entry
- unconditional love by Moonlightdragon.
600 points, ended August 29, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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excellent
I keep thinking how proud i would be to have a son that express love as you have
thank you for the entry
Robert
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AWWWWWWW
Danny-bear missed his daddy!!! lol jk i love you and great write
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