I'm dying to be in your arms tonight
I know our lives will change
This was a way to start anew
Because I knew we neeeded it
Now I just wanna hear you say
"Son I love you"
I am homesick
With my family not knowing where I am
There's no way they miss me more
Than I do them
I just want her to hear me say
"I regret not saying this before
I need you, more than you need me
Its why I miss you so much
Mother"
Mother,
Our times may not have been the same
We rarely saw eye to eye
Your motherly love has helped me more and more as time passed
As our love has grown and grown from lack of contact
When I was young
I'm sure there was a song you sung to me
Well, now I sing to myself
And its not the same
I miss you mom
I love you mom
Author notes
written during basic training
dedicated to my mom
In a list
A contest entry
- show me your sensitiveness... by poetic-enigma21.
800 points, ended November 5, 2008, 11 entries
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""I regret not saying this before
I need you, more than you need me
Its why I miss you so much
Mother"
Mother,
Our times may not have been the same
We rarely saw eye to eye
Your motherly love has helped me more and more as time passed
As our love has grown and grown from lack of contact
When I was young
I'm sure there was a song you sung to me
Well, now I sing to myself
And its not the same
I miss you mom
I love you mom"
This was really touching. I really enjoyed these stanzas. Heartfelt and touching...Sounds like you and your mother are pretty close. That is really good to hear. A mother's love is dear to most children.
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actually we're not close at all
i left for the army because me and my parents were so not close and i wanted to get started on a life on my own
and i wrote this during basic training
all the army got me was a messed up back and a year behind in college, they kicked me out
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Veryu good piece. You really made it feel emotional and real. Great job with the penning! An A+ job with word usage and everything. Keep up the great work! I will be looking forward to reading and commenting on more of your work soon. i hope that you can get the chance to COMMENT back on my work, seeing as how I am sure that you and I take the same amount of love and put it into each and every piece that we write! Thanks so much for the share and again, a brilliant write!
THANKS SO MUCH!
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very well expressed...no one can ever match the tender love, support and peace one finds with mother...
moms the best...
great write
good luck
cheers
shilpa
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awww
this is beautiful....Danny missed his mommy......jk i love the poem
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