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I Joined The Army

Sorry its not our time
I can't wait the couple years
I want to be in your arms now

I'm on the last thread
Of whom you knew
Turning into who I will become

Change is not by choice
Its something I must do
I can only hope the change is subtle or small
Because it was to adapt

I know I miss you
I know you miss me
But I can't help
That I care for you so much
That I let go to see if you come back
If so, you will be mine forever
I can't help I left for you
I care so much for your safety
That I left to learn to protect
I joined the army for you

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written in week 2 of basic training

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  • fallenangel671
    August 27, 2008
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    aww. this is soo sweet too, you're still an amazing poet<3


  • City-of-Angels
    August 23, 2008

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    "I care so much for your safety
    That I left to learn to protect
    I joined the army for you"
    ^great ending
    Very sincere and emotional write, Great job.


  • Til the Day I Die
    August 23, 2008
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    aww

    this is so sweet i like it!!!