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Safe Haven

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I’ll keep you safe within my palms
no time for fear or need to sigh,
a fairy sweet with magic charms,
please do not cry.

For you I will provide a home
a place where you may rest and lie,
return to here if you should roam,
please do not cry.

If you should need to test your wings
and in the dark should try to fly,
remember what my true love brings,
please do not cry.

A light will always burn for you
be visible as you pass by,
a haven should your heart feel blue,
your tears now dry.

 

 


 

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  • Nickelspring gold member
    August 21

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    I love the repeating line is this, changed up at the end for impact. Excellent.
    Very enjoyable read. Bookmarked.
    K


  • moonbumps silver member
    August 24, 2008
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    Ahhhhh...this was LUVERLY-just like you Soooz
    Hilly xxx


  • Patpowers silver member
    August 24, 2008

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    Nice job Sue!

    What a nice effort here Sue. The prompt was perfect.Great job on the words and the expression in this.THANKS!!!


  • Thomas Scott gold member
    August 24, 2008
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    Excellent take on the prompt, I'd say.
    Good luck int eh contest.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    August 24, 2008

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    Just beautiful! A lovely take on the picture Sue! Full of love and caring!


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    August 23, 2008

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    Very nicely done. It seems to me that is something that a foster mother would tell her new foster child. Great job.


  • arafura gold member
    August 23, 2008
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    I love this. Wonderful work my friend.


  • fairytalelovestory
    August 23, 2008
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    beautiful take on the prompt. good luck

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