You may be perfect, but I still think you're nothing.
Author notes
"You may be _______, but I still think you're _________."
One, two,
one, two, three, four
A contest entry
- PIF- Quickie :] by Jasmine Rayne.
700 points, ended August 26, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I like this a lot! It's very brooding and moody. I can feel the hatred/anger towards your subject in just these few words. Wonderful job here! Thanks for entering

-Lily♥ -
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Thank you!
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