Innuendoes.

Sworn to the promise
of destiny,
torrid, blazing, molten.

Perfumed whispers
caress the recesses
of forgotten sensations.

Liquid contours curve
the hesitant response
into acceptance.

Shivered apprehension
quakes the timbre
of sublime expectation.

Quintessential release
hangs as a thought,
spiced with innuendo...

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ForeverLoving
August 25, 2008
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that was really cool i liked it alot.
- cutiepie
  August 26, 2008
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  Glad you enjoyed it Thank you
TheRamer
August 23, 2008

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oooh.... I liked this... it was really sensual, organic, and restless... I really loved the wording and intensity of the last stanza the most! I'm not the best at critiquing based on form, but i'd have to say that this was close to perfect... the flow was effortless and the imagery, well, it was straight up sexy in my mind... anyways, great piece, please do keep them coming...
Sincerely,
TheRamer
- cutiepie
  August 23, 2008
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  Thank you I am a bit out of my box but enjoyed the challenge. Glad you enjoyed it
- - TheRamer
    August 23, 2008
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    No i really really like this! I've recently stepped out from under a rock of sorts, and i've been feening for some inspiration and some great reading... luckily Stephanie Meyers last book came out for the twilight series, and luckily i found this, it was perfect... I thank you for writing such a beautiful selection... i'll be visiting some more of you stuff here in time... don't read mine though, it's all too forced and negative....
z etoile
August 23, 2008
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beautifu poem great job!
- cutiepie
  August 23, 2008
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  Thank you . Delighted you enjoyed it