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Bath


You are a pale pearl
in the clam-shell half light.
Evening, blue behind that curtain,
silent as the sound of water dies away.
Barefoot, you towel the last clinging drops
from your skin. I see you as God does;
Without sin. The picture of Genesis
without shame.


By Marissa A Scott.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    Yes..I do see that image through the words worded by you...a musical verse of the beauty of life by the poet..well done...