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mood

dark depths, black and cool
flowing creatures good and bad
this place is cruel
no place for the sane, only the mad
I don't belong here
theres nothing familiar
will it bring me tears?
am I really a killer?
how did it die?
where did the time go?
time to say goodbye
I let go

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just 'arting' aka feeling creative

short and hopefully sweet, what do you think?

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  • just mercedes gold member
    August 26, 2008
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    A dark write, very descriptive.

    It's a great way to play, letting the words come.


    • blackdragun
      August 26, 2008
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      thanks, I was kinda bored one day and just typed random words and tried to make it fit, glad you like it


  • Princess Perdue gold member
    August 24, 2008

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    Another well written piece from you, a little dark, but very descriptive, leaves the reader pondering. Quite thought provoking. Nicely done.

    Shaz xx