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Vocal Love

 

 

 

In springtime he waits
sitting on the lily pad
croaking for his mate
 

 

 

 

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  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    August 26, 2008

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    Love It!!!

    I am a frog fanatic/maniac. This is absolutely a wonderful and traditional haiku of nature and it's workings. Great read and wonderful background. mandie


  • DogFish silver member
    August 24, 2008
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    haiku shouldn't rhyme...but three thumbs up!


  • Thomas Scott gold member
    August 24, 2008
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    Boffo!

    This is very good haiku.
    Good luck in the contest.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    August 24, 2008

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    Fabulous Haiku! Love the background too


  • arafura gold member
    August 23, 2008
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    I love it! Very effective in its imagery.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    awww, i really like this, it flows well, and is very natural
    good luck in the contest and take care
    Stephanie ♥


  • cricketjeff gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    I reddit
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    And I liked it


  • z etoile
    August 23, 2008
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    Awe so short sweet and beautiful outstanding job!

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