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Nothing Left

Three long years have passed

But my mind and heart still long 

to hear your voice

call my name

 

There's nothing left here to remind me
Just the memory of your face

A smile appears when I remember

How my heart beat faster when you touched my hand

 

I'll just be standing here
And you coming back to me
Is against the odds

But I can still hope.

Author notes

Well, inspired by 'Against All Odds' - Postal Service. And yes, I used the lyrics.
And of course a person from a long time ago who is still on my mind.

Really short, I dont know if I like it...

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  • GiftedPsychosis gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    Well, I know that I like it.

    And that's all that matters. That I like it.

    You know it!

    :-P

     

    It it it it it it it....... ect.

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