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dark green shape
waiting for evening slugs
not the mower

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I don't do haiku

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  • DogFish silver member
    August 24, 2008
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    ooch!

    ...like frogs don't do mowers!


  • moonbumps silver member
    August 24, 2008
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    Tee Hee!
    Nor do I!!
    Bumpy xxx


  • Dalaney gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    i love your wit, sweet Poet... love, lane xxoo


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    LMAO

    indeed she spoke again..S she caught me on the Haiku as well..senyru?
    I finally leanred the difference and I was taught haiku 5 7 5 didnt say nothing about nature to loe ect.
    Ah well live and learn or die trying.


    Love ya

    Passions


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    August 23, 2008
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    No, but you do perfect senryu!

    Sensei, she say, not bad bro.

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