I scream in your ears
My lungs are shattered tears
I cry alone again
Broken in my own pain
You left me once more
With a new closed door
The key you took it away
The dreams you send at bay
A silent farewell is sent
Between your lips, intent
I reach to the hole inside
It’s getting each day so wide
You broke the memories
And shattered my fantasies
And all the promises made
Are before me now laid
Bleeding in my palm
And oh, you’re so calm
Like you’ve always been before
You always get the highest score
And throw me away again
With my dress in blood you stain
I remember how you were
An angel who my love to can’t be contained
But now though I still love you
I know you no longer do
And it’s me again so lonely
Broken by the memories you brought me
Running endlessly away
I could never survive this day
When you silently disappeared
From my heart and home and bed
So farewell my lost broken angel
I’ll always wear your bangle
The gift you gave me once
At the end of our first dance
But that was just a dream
Now you can’t even hear me scream
Farewell
Author notes
It might not be so understandable but I have writters block and that's the best I could write.
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Most understaood write here
As one who has felt it and lived it so are the memories that never fades even though we move on in life we know that dream once was whole yet in the turn around on ones life it often hurts so and we whisper what could have been yet then as it came it once again fades away -
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Humm..some clouds bring water and some not..but it does not mean that rain will not be there..one should not lose the heart...a great heart felt story you wrote..
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I hear you honey and yes I have been in your shoes
I wrote a poem years back when this happened to me and its called Once A Rose and it tells of the battles I went through and how I regained my strength and then as I bloomed again he saw me out on the daance floor and how beautiful I was in love a look he had so thrown away honey you will bloom again and one day yes he will see you across a dance floor and in that moment he will feel the pain you have felt all along for fools who sees not the love within arms reach in time have no one and they daily relive the actions and choices they made uncareing to the love so true . You will bloom again honey for everything happens for a reason and the love that shall lift you to the highest is to come dont let the sorrows keep you from seeing this love and fly
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Thank you very much for your kind words,
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Great write!! Can relate to this well!! Nice flow and rhyming too!!
-Cheers
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Thank you.
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