I STOOD ALONE, IN SILENT AWE, AS I GAZED INTO THE MIDNIGHT SKY,
THE STARS, IN ALL THEIR BEAUTY, STARED BACK AT ME,AND I
REALISED MY UNIMPORTANCE,IN THE BOUNDLESS EXPANSE OF SPACE
UNHEARD, UNSEEN, JUST ME ,MY TIME, ON THIS TINY LIVING BALL,
YET NO, NOT ALONE, NOT UNSEEN, FOR WITH ME IS THE MIGHTIEST OF ALL.
Author notes
ME, GOD AND HIS CREATION AWESOME
A contest entry
- Christian Themed Quicke/5 lines by Carly Pop.
300 points, ended August 29, 2008, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Well Done!!!
I am Inspired.....That Is the Best Compliment I can think of..... I am Inspired...
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Excellent I Am Mezmerized !
I really love this poem here thath God had you pen. All about his world that we all live in. It's beauty that you see as well,between the silent, the sky, the star's, the Space Unheard, Unseen, Just Me, My time, On For With Me Is The Mightiest Of All.Sorry I Had to use all of these word's of your's, but I could not leave such beauty out. Congradulation's On Your Gold Trophy ! You really desirve it ! God Bless You Alway's, And In Your Word's That He Inspires You To Write!!!!!!! Brenda Gae
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Beautiful, brilliant write ..
I so loved this! May I please place this on my Author's page? But not in upper case? Please let me know! I shall post it there nevertheless, with your name and link with it ... For now it is MINE too
I LOVE IT! 
Congratulations on a well deserved Gold!
Love
Myra
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Awe inspiring write. Congratulations on wining the gold. Katie
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wow!!
one of the best i have read so far!!! thank you for entering
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Wow! I am standing right there with you. You took me to floating to that place called WORLD.
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thankyou i felt it as i wrote it, i'm glad you did too
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