ripples spread out
the pool remembers
a frog was here
ripples spread out
the pool remembers
a frog was here
Author notes
[4-5-4 haiku, with kireji at the first line]
In a list
A contest entry
- F...is for frog! by DogFish.
400 points, ended August 29, 2008, 20 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - YOUR GOLD WINNING HAIKUS by Swan song.
700 points, ended August 28, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Yes!!! very good! thank you for sharing this nicely done KU
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Hi, congratulations on the gold a super Haiku, kind regards Di
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&^%$$
Kiss kiss, poooof a prince
Stroked into a regal king
By a maiden green
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mhm
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Wow, for a haiku, I like the simplicity here
Reminiscence, the beauty of nature, etc
Good luck in the contest!
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Thank you - the simplicity is everything.
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magical !
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And thank you again!
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Oh this is such a cool haiku. The the idea of the 'remembering pool' . You are so fantastic at these.
Meg
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the ripples are the brief, transient memory - very "zen".
Glad you liked it.
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Yes, I dare say it is. lol.
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off shore lines we watch
each lily touched by life
by a friend that croaks
LMAO
great job Mairi!!
best wishes in the contest..but come on really...
is there any other winner?
Wait..don't tell Jeff I said that
s but hey he was busted as well lmao..haiku- senyru oh diggity.
Love ya
Tory
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"best wishes in the contest..but come on really...
is there any other winner?"
LOL I do wish people wouldn't say that! It hexes the whole darn thing! 
Thank you, Tory.
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Hey come on lol im just helping out the others but you know i love you...do you need all the gold???? LMAO.
Okay okay...im sorry..*hangs head* i didnt mean to hex anyone
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Frog fun has begun!
Sorry, no frog emoticon! 
But here is another friend from the pond... 
lol Love your haiku!
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Good haiku. I love the notion of a pond with memory!
Best of luck,
Bill
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It's very short term, and fades as the force of the ripples dissipates.
Thank you.
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mairi logs on
poetry follows
fools read
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(that means not bad btw)
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I ken fine
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If the kimono fits, bro...
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It is a wise man who knows he is but a fool, fools know they are wise.
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Quit while you're ahead.
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you even do Haikus?
this takes me back to my childhood, frogs were always about after a heavy rain shower
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I do them when the fit's on me, AJ.
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