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Always Loving You

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A captured heart on desert sand,
he fought a war and took a stand.
Among the turmoil we fell in love,
we shared a star in heaven above.

Three years ago, but love remains,
love still wash over sandy grains
Hearts on fire in hidden places,
stolen kisses and warm embraces.

On different shores love rushed in,
so quickly my heart you did win.
Remaining safe within your hands,
dancing without music or bands.

Time nor distance can take away,
the love found, still shared today.
Standing the test of time so far,
share our hearts wherever we are.

At times life prevents two to be one,
love in the heart can not be undone.
We share what we can within reach,
poems, love, drawn hearts on beach.

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  • second-born
    August 25, 2008

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    "At times life prevents two to be one,
    love in the heart can not be undone." - This is so true and so sweet....this piece is a perfect complement to the given picture...I like this a lot!!!


    • Sandygram silver member
      August 25, 2008
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      Thank you for the nice comment. You take care, Sandy


  • BeautifullyBroken42
    August 23, 2008

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    This was a beautiful poem. Filled with so much emotion. It was amazing. It flowed so well!

    Nice job! Good luck!


  • Puppydog gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    SO LOVELY!!!!

    The smooth flow and tender words just lifts up ones heart as they read. 's

    • Sandygram silver member
      August 24, 2008
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      Good Morning Kevin

      It always is so nice when you stop by. I hope you are enjoying the beautiful sunny weather in Penn. Hope all is well. You take care.

      Always,
      Sandy


  • Samplette gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    A wonderful write. Full of emotion and love. Very well written. Has a sad longing to it, but still it is hopeful. Beautiful.
    Sam


    • Sandygram silver member
      August 24, 2008
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      Thank You Sam

      I appreciate you reading and commenting. Many Blessings to you and yours.

      Sandy

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