The Bliss
I looked at him,
he was just aloof,
though with love deep and strong,
that did not need proof,
he smiled feebly at me,
but I gathered,
all the feelings that had flowered,
they were bursting at seams,
as I could catch sharp beams,
of strong loving dreams,
we were matched,
and it was full blown,
and not just hatched,
we needed just a little,
time to be skittled,
in isolation and place,
in an embrace,
that lasted days,
wherein sometimes we laid,
in kiss,
that was nothing short of bliss.
Author notes
wherein sometimes we laid,
in kiss,
that was nothing short of bliss.
A contest entry
- My first Contest ever please come and join by ProudMomma.
350 points, ended August 23, 2008, 6 entries
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Reminds me that love sometimes takes time and the right circumstances to blossom. Thanks for entering the contest and good luck!
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Thank you, mustsay it was quite a blissful time youshared in that kiss. delightful, enjoyed it.
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Grrr. Sometimes this site is a bear. The smiling reindeer did not attach.
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Nice job. I enjoyed this alot. It is a very pleasent read. My favorite lines were:
we needed just a little,
time to be skittled,
in isolation and place,
in an embrace,
that lasted days,
wherein sometimes we laid,
in kiss,
that was nothing short of bliss.
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sweet and lovely poem
enjoyed reading this tonight. blessings always~ Trisha~
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