I am the super generic mutant.
Evolved ultimate clone breed:
My touch transforms each one,
Metabolizes, your basic need.
Hybrid dragon, in lycans cross
Ageless in genetic super form.
Cynogynetics in my backbone,
Nano percent vampire returns.
Chrorzomes melt to my whim.
Recessive’s self destruct code,
Pregnant she-vampire imitate,
Impregnated loose blood itch.
Dominant pure line my treat,
Gene ethos cross-fired seed,
Mammal brain in peak strain,
Muscle’s structure you dream.
Connect at night or in the day,
Be a dragon-vampire to wish.
Never fire fangs within a kiss,
My magic; you change O! Miss.
Infinite I kill,fight sin at will.
Rebel coffin's raider you creep,
Blood sucking dark, exotic clip
Struck; your soul too will leave.
Declare war on Lycan Packs,
Annihilation, you shall face?
Author notes
A vampire is no living person who can breed.
live under ground in coffins.
Lycans will always dominate as they evolve to a higher structured level both in brains and muscle body strength.
Of course I am a lycan
no one can really afford to fight with.
A contest entry
- Calling All Vampyre and Lycan by Riftkin.
850 points, ended September 1, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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oo i like the voice/tone it stands out clear and strong, its different sounding and intriguing,
for this piece
my personal favorite parts are the first and 3rd paragraph
because of the "generic mutant" idea
and
the mental picture and sound of "Chromosomes melt to my whim"
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I Must Have Slept Through The Contest
Is "cynogenetics" to be taken as being pronounced "sigh-no-gen..." or, in the ancient greek manner, "cue-no-...". Both would fit with the backbone concept, although the latter cut both ways as it were.
"chrorzomes" - ? "chromosomes"?
Well, they say the werewolves always lose usually.
But then, one has one's own views of the Vampire Mythos:
- cannot reflect upon themselves in a mirror;
- cannot cross a threshold without being invited;
- cease to mature from the day they vampirise;
- no few other potential directions for symbolic interpretation along negative lines.
Vampires are said to have Inhuman Strength, a long time to develop their intelligence: in what way does that mark Liecans as different, superior?
Regardless, away from content, to poetry: clearly the author enjoys the words and revels in contemplation of the subject matter, and this transmits itself to the reader. Whether that be an example of Vampiric or Lycanaiec contagion, I do not know, but I applaud the revel. And the contagion!
Master Anarchy
aka
The Vampyre Thubbalon 218.
Etymologically, "vampire" comes from the word "van", to lead; I interpret the "vampire" and the "vampyre" differently myself, along the lines of one as the leading fire (vam-pyre), the other the irritatingly salacious (vamp-ire).
The Temple of Set (qv. xeper.org) name their high initiates Vampires. So if you seek prey, you might start there but, beware: they are Peopled by American Army personell and University Graduates, among Others.
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I am glad you have joined the war
and I look forward to see how it will end.
Hope to see you in the next round.
Riftkin
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My friend
You tongue speaks true...your heart flames with strength. In the end though...I will eat you too!
wolf
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Excellent piece! The word play is awesome! I'm not fully versed on the legend of vampires and know nothing of lycan. But this is a wicked tale you've told and a super read! Much luck in your contest
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