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The Saxophone Player


He has brown skin and violet eyes,
talks tough when she’s around;
but every humble peek he takes
his heart goes skitter
like a pebble on a xylophone.
Down by the rusty railings,
under an apple moon,
he sees her moving slowly
to each luminous jazz note
sent from his window,
a sashay of zebra-toned daisy chains
for her, for her.

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Word Bank: violet tough humble pebble xylophone rusty apple moving luminous jazz note window sashay zebra daisy

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  • Judith Chandler
    September 3, 2008

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    Nice to see my word bank turned into love poetry from afar. "A sashay for zebra-toned daisy chains" -- lovely line.

    Thank you for entering my contest.