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Frog

A still, frozen lake,
Supports the frog, as it longs
For the sun's melting.

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Hmm.. a haiku. About a frog, longing for the lake to be free of the frost.

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  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    August 26, 2008

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    Love It!!!

    Great imagery and lovely wording. I am a frog fan myself so when I run across a piece about these cute little amphibians I am in love. Great haiku. mandie


  • DogFish silver member
    August 24, 2008
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    A very stunning contrast to the idea of frogs as emblems of summer!