light
swirling around rustle of hair
like crown, like halo:
I know this girl
fingers splayed to reach in and tug;
a mother's hand ruffling,
a memory of a lover’s grasp
light
In a list
A contest entry
- From Beginning and , At the End, ll by LadyLavender.
900 points, ended August 25, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Perfect in all its light.
good luck and thank you for entering. -
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This is such a gorgeous picture...look, you can even see the different colors of her roots....I think that drew me in even more.
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ty dear friend
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love this it's so mesmerizing. like the bg and picture as well
good luck and take care
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ty, Stephanie...
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