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Lady Frog's Ode

tenor's song stirs sweet dark
love essence glistens slick skin
pond's frog prince appears

Author notes

Ah! to love a frog. Slime love sublime.

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  • Heartless Angel
    August 30, 2008

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    Ribbit, ribbit

    This is such an original idea for a poem and you executed it in haiku form very well. Sometimes people write haikus that are seriously lacking, but you gave enough emotion, imagery and a little bit of fun (it's a poem about a FROG. in 3 lines and 17 syllables.You are very talented. I enjoyed this very much.

    Blessings,
    Lilly


  • james119
    August 29, 2008

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    froggie went a-courtin' eh
    nice job with the 5-7-5 telling the tale.


  • DogFish silver member
    August 24, 2008
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    An ode?...a three line opera!


  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 23, 2008
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    awww, this is a great haiku, good luck in the contest and take care
    Stephanie ♥

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