down the road i seek my destiny,
in depth i sing "Wgy do u hurt me like u do?"
some where i see why im here
down this lonely road i learn
to fight, to survie, to love
to bet the odds when they come
i learnt that poeple say things
with in depth destiny said good bye
when i tried to kill my self
but it gave up
this is not my destiny
to die at a young age
i learnt self pride, rescept,
dont give up hope nore do not tell lies
i see that destiny has never givin up so i wont eithier
Please tell me what you think
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Your poem has real potential
This poem has real potential. You really put your heart into this poem and I love that. I also like how you use personification. If you fixed some spelling mistakes and fixed your flow you would have a true beauty
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