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Falling.x

She's crying she's breaking
She's lying she's faking,
She's hated and taunted
She's wanted and flaunted
She's a puppet on a string,
An angel with one wing
She's every girl you want her to be,
But she only wants her self esteem.

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  • blackdragun
    August 23, 2008
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    short and sweet, I like it


  • hearts06
    August 23, 2008
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    i love this. its reallyyy good !


  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    aww this is terrfic, perfect rhyme and flow, aot of emotion and just wow, good luck and take care

    Stephanie ♥