there are such things
that grow, developed from mist
to light, without glow
within mind’s depth
that seek answers, but continue
as questions, clearly
touched within the heart, felt
as yearning that escapes
true definition, but known
Author notes
Picture: Hollow by Exhale_NL - Deviantart
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie-Prompts 10x100words-Reserve by Cannonsfire.
525 points, ended August 23, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Congratulations on your trophy, Frans!
And what a beautiful reflection on the prompt ... Ever spiritual, you probe until you find the essence of words and of feelings. So very well done.
Hierdie gedig is vir my 'n troos, veral na ons gesprek van vanmiddag.
Groete hier vanuit George.
Myra
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Beautiful Sentiments, Poet!!!
Congratulations on the HM trophy!!! 
Peace & love always, Cyn
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Beautiful Poem!!!!!
This was so lovely Frans. The words sound so amazing when read out loud. This should have been a Gold winner. A perfect poem for the picture prompt. A pleasure to read this morning. You do have a talent for writing. You take care.
Worth many clappys...
Bless you my friend,
Sandy
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Thank you Sandy
your support and friendship is much appreciated. Frans.
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Thank you
my friend. You reaped some wonderful poems, and your choice of the first three must have had you reading and re-reading! Frans -
light is perhaps one of the most wondrous things to me, whether visible or in the minds eye, as are those ever unanswered questions..
still for me, I prefer to leave them in the realm of mystery because that's what allows me to breathe..
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The universe is a challenge to us all as is life, perhaps the hollow needs to be there so we can all still have room to breathe. Love C
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this is great for the prompt and a lovely take, good luck and take care
Stephanie ♥
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