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Unanswered.

Love,
It's not just a story -
that ends.

And Love,
Is more than just the touch -
of your hand.

No Love,
Was here and it was real -
we know that.

But now Love,
Baby, it doesn't...
JUST COME BACK TO ME!!!!

Oh I hold on still to
Love
A thing that wont slow down
This LOVE won't be F****ing
Put on the GROUND!!!!

So baby kiss these scars -
the lines in my heart.
This pain is my token of my bliss of you.
OH DON'T KILL ME NOW!!!
Don't you see that things are about to change?

The weather was made of our pain...

and our love...

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yeah... lyrics.

anger and passion.

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  • ModernXTimes
    August 23, 2008

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    Aw. alex! Either the contest finally got back to you or you just said screw it.
    Very strong write. T_T Sad though. I know how you're feeling. I'm glad that you're writing again though. ^_^

    "So baby kiss these scars -
    the lines in my heart.
    This pain is my token of my bliss of you."

    Very beautiful lines. Just remember that pain always subsides. The important thing is that there are memories and emotions to remember. The fact you lived through it is what's most important.

    Love you and welcome back!
    ~Carli~


  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    awww wow alex, this is a very strong and emotional write, hope you are okays *hugs*
    love you cuzzy
    keep up the writting ^_^
    Stephanie ♥


  • risewiththesmoke
    August 23, 2008
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    love it! this would make a great rock song!


  • Lady Australis silver member
    August 23, 2008
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    its beautiful
    sing it for me