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Madness

Missing image
Eyes of a frantic society
covet desires in similar ways.
Blinded by raging anxiety,
viewing the mind as it decays.

Pursuit of shallow dreams,
creator of the dark obsession.
Nothing's ever as it seems,
except the stench of depression.


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  • Frodofan silver member
    August 23, 2008

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    And what type of meter would you call this?

    Not bad. I feel as though it's lacking something. For me, it needs some extra oomph to really get to me. I'm not sure what though. I guess it's something to think on.

    Thanks for entering.