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One Year

One year of celebration -
a journey of immeasurable pain,
lived, as each day brought
depth that was to be.

One year nearly gone –
marking the time, days,
begun by a morning without sun,
when Matthew left his mom.

One year of celebration –
preceded by newly found love,
when a son guided his mom
towards words, journeyed heart.

One year nearly gone –
this path with shredded peace,
as a mom yearned her son
now living with glorious Son.

One year of celebration –
one year nearly gone,
both milestones bathed
with memories of sad love.

One year nearly gone -
a prayer of unwanted journey;
one year of celebration -
memories of a journey penned.


Author notes

One year nearly gone - Matthew's passing into the arms of the Lord. One year of celebration - a journey begun inspired by Matthew, now to continue as we celebrate Kelle Merle's journey as friends with her - an honest open-hearted mother and person from whom we have derived much growth, because she allowed us these journeys - with her.

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  • penman gold member
    September 5, 2008
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    Excellent

    A very touching creation. And so very thoughtful. Congratulations on the honorable mention.


  • myrataal gold member
    August 28, 2008

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    You are a precious and compassionate friend ...

    and with beautiful words you stressed accurately this very sorrowful journey of loss. Simply divinely executed.

    Love
    Myra


  • SilverButterfly gold member
    August 25, 2008

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    this is such a heartfelt, beautiful poem written with great compassion for Kelle. I applaud you for this amazing entry!!

    SilverButterfly


  • stavykm gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    So Beautiful

    Oh Frans thank you so much for writing such a beautiful poem. Yes One Year here on AP and have become good friends with you because of all the love and support you've given me, so here's a big THANK YOU. Yes this has been a journey allright and it's not over yet.

    One year of celebration
    preceded by newly found love,
    when a son guided his mom
    towards words, journeyed heart.

    Oh yes my heart has poured out through my writings in which I didn't even know I had poetry in me. Maybe not the best but I hope to learn as I go. Thank you for writing for my one year contest and best of luck in the contest.
    Wishing You Many Blessings Always
    Much Love
    Kelle Marie


    • FransB gold member
      September 5, 2008
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      Dear Kelle Marie

      See it this way. None wrote to receive an award, and if we could, besides our poems, we would have send you hugs in gold. In fact, we did. Thank you for the HM, but most of all, thank you for allowing a wonderful friendship. I still remember the morning we made our first contact, and since then, a year now, we have had weekly contact. Many things are precious to me, but I mostly 'enjoy' that we communicate just as we are. I send you and your family my blessings. Frans


    • myrataal gold member
      August 28, 2008
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      Once again we are linked to you ...

      beloved Poetess ... and via our friend, Frans, I too say:

      One year of celebration –
      preceded by newly found love,
      when a son guided his mom
      towards words, journeyed heart.

      Love and peace to you, Kelle Marie.
      Myra


  • Cannonsfire
    August 23, 2008

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    Just lovely and a beautiful tribute to a mother with much strength and will to go on despite the hardship of her continued journey. I am sure she will adore this. Love, C

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