light
cold
frothy
delicacy
upon buds
of sensuality,
a tasty diaphanous
blossom of tickled pink
petals, and giggled yellow.
the tender jade stem that
veins the nightly sky
in the petal's embrace
a naked moist
velvet kiss
of the new
day's
light
Author notes
Inspired by white grass in the early mornings
and inspired by the word 'Light'
A contest entry
- From Beginning and , At the End, ll by LadyLavender.
900 points, ended August 25, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please? and thank you...
Comments
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read this agin metaphors and imagery...outstanding.
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Love this...but Light must be the first word. Still time to adjust if you wish.
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k fixed it
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