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From Light To Love

Light to guide you
As you walk in the dark
Your hand in her hand
As you wander in the park

Love connects two hearts
Both gazing the sky at night
Whispering words of zilch
Under the pale cool light



Summer51

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  • LadyLavender gold member
    August 24, 2008
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    Beautiful...very beautiful.


    • Summer52
      August 24, 2008
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      Oh, thank you very much, LadyLavander.
      An honor to be commented by YOU.


      Summer51


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    August 23, 2008
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    Love's light to guide,
    no words needed....
    Perfect, summer.

    Mumsy


    • Summer52
      August 23, 2008

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      Hello, Mumsy!

      Yes, two hearts connect
      no words needed; only
      the light from the night
      sky and the point of light
      from the stars above are
      the witness as love blooms
      between two people in love.

      Thanks, Mumsy!


      Summer

      • Aesthete2000 gold member
        August 23, 2008
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        And you expressed it so well!!!


        • Summer52
          August 23, 2008
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          Oh, just in the "mood" today.
          When you're in love, the only
          color you see is RED... hahaha!

          Thanks, Mumsy!

          Summer

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