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green floats throughout pond
as plants and frogs meld living
hawk feasts on food chain

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  • DogFish silver member
    August 24, 2008
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    Organic !


  • Emerald Lass
    August 24, 2008

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    Your green pond is brilliant with the feeling of an algae world. Wonderful write!


  • Polaja Greeters member
    August 23, 2008

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    I really like the original and naturalistic take on the prompt - loved the addition of the food chain and the hawk I wish you the best in the contest!

    Keep writing

    Polly