Soft summer whispers
leaves rustle in the breeze-
a frog croaks
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Love you Tory
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A contest entry
- F...is for frog! by DogFish.
400 points, ended August 29, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wonderful!
I love the pictures and the background for starters. The Haiku was well worded and put together and it has my favorite topic. Frogs! All in all a brilliant piece in my book. Great!
mandie
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Haha, the frog croaking was random: love it
Nice background, I especially like the border ^^
Good luck in the contest ~
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I,d have titled the poem "summer whispers"...but other than that: first rate!
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i love the background!
but this is a terrific haiku, good luck and take care
Stephanie ♥ -
Good One!
This background
as well brother! 
Thanks for sharing here, pen on poet!
Peace, brother Timothy
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I love the background for this piece it is adorable, in a froggy kind of way
the haiku is brilliant, I really like the way that it seems like the frog croaks as an afterthought - good luck in the contest!
Keep writing
Polly
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This is cute..
now...I hate things that
croak lmao..so old man..yuou know what that means
LMAO
Love you
Tory
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