light unfolds out of
your hair, turning tan as it
mixes and swirls not
unlike a huge lollipop,
which is than held up again
to that selfsame light
A contest entry
- From Beginning and , At the End, ll by LadyLavender.
900 points, ended August 25, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very pretty imagery here...light and lovely
Thank you and good luck
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