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Searching for the Screams

Sound of passion echoing down the hall,
arousal is peaked when I heard the screams.
On all fours immediately I crawl,
searching the room full of erotic dreams.

A door to the left revealed single men,
standing in line, all of them side by side.
Totally naked I peaked in on them,
and started to get heated up inside.

Listening intently I wanted more,
should I stay here or move on down the halls?
I couldn't take it, I opened the door,
each man started growing, rubbing their balls.

Mouth becomes hungry as I see the treat,
begin licking my lips, I longed to eat.

My nipples got hard and I was now wet,
the closer I got their smiles become wide.
Moistures forming on their bodies I bet
when a  woman put a whip to my hide.

Tears welled up within my eyes at the blow,
yet arousal too caught my attention.
Quick to my knees, I was ready to show,
this lady how to relieve all that tension.

As she circled around, she grabbed my hair,
with a jolt she could lead me anywhere.
Biting down on my lips, she didn't play fair,
and stripped me down until I was bare.

On my back she did demand me to go,
and across my mound she let the whip blow.

Squatting above me, the guys watch in awe,
as she placed clamps tight upon my lower lips.
Imaginations peaked by what they saw,
and the men started stroking with tight grips.

She then tugged, with pain I moan out loud,
and across my breasts a paddle came down.
Fire soared from side to side, she stood proud,
as my body trembled, I soak the ground.

Sweet honey fell from my well of passion,
and spreading me wide she let one man in.
His throbbing member was quick to rush-in,
as on my lips this ladies now sitting.

His eyes focused on the arse in front of him
pumping me harder, nails are digging in.

Honey dripping into my open mouth
as his length penetrates with hard thrusts.
Moans from the others as her hands slid south
rubbing her mound fast, fulfilling her lusts.

The others watched and wanted to join,
but the lady kept it between the three.
All the men standing with a swollen groin,
could only enjoy the cumming of me.

Within the final moments she spun around,
leaning down she licked him while sliding in me.
Biting down on my clit, I made no sound,
He exploded on her face, so hot and creamy.

To my lips she kissed, I licked her clean,
then with a snap, the whip closed the scene.

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Comments

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  • Ho74pp1eP1e
    September 2, 2008
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    That was HOT! I don't even know what to say right now I am just worked up. lol Well done.


  • Swan song gold member
    August 24, 2008

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    well now my blood pressure medication will not longer work you are going to give me a heart attack lol damn you are so poetically naughty.


  • cricketjeff gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    Bloody hell!!!!
    Some more than just hot sonneting here!

    As erotic as it gets I fancy!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    Excellent Hard-Core Erotica!

    A potent write it sounds like to me!
    Thanks for sharing your gifted pen.
    All the best within this contest V~

    Peace, and love, Timothy


  • Griswold silver member
    August 23, 2008

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    Beautifully and wonderfully written honey, several hot Sonnets in this piece. Excellent job lover. I Love you...Scott


  • Volfeng
    August 23, 2008

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    Very hot, sounds like a definite winner to me, Love You!!!

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