Silence broken by
a frog's reverberation
off the sturdy trees
Author notes
My backyard and Debussy's music! 
A contest entry
- F...is for frog! by DogFish.
400 points, ended August 29, 2008, 20 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Well done - congratulations on the bronze.
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Wonderful!
Beautifully penned. I loved the flow of it and the way it refers to natures beloved amphibian, the frog. I couldn't write a better piece if I tried. Thank you for sharing.
mandie
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I like your use of the word "reverberation "! It is almost onomatopoeic to the sound of the woodland echos!
But I really like the punch at the end where your little companion shakes oak and cedar!
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this is a really good haiku, i can imagine the picture well, and the sound
take care, and good luck
Stephanie ♥ -
This is very well written
I like the image of a relaxing summer afternoon that it paints in my mind - I wish you good luck in the contest
Keep writing
Polly
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