Light of love
engulfed my heart
the moment I beheld her face.
It consumed my sorrow,
warming my emptiness
with passion's precious rays.
Her caress a match,
lighting a candle
forever,
as my soul's guiding light.
Author notes
36 words
prompt: light
A contest entry
- From Beginning and , At the End, ll by LadyLavender.
900 points, ended August 25, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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SIGH!!!!!!!!
This is such a fantastic read, and ohhhh so romantic! What a beautiful job you did on this one! I don't know if I have a favorite part to this one! Absolutely wonderful my brother!
Best of luck to you in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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This is really romantic! My favorite part was the end "Her caress a match lighting a canle forever as my souls guiding light" What a perfect way to say she's your soulmate. I hope she likes it as much as I did!
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Gorgeous imagery, and loved the following:
"Her caress a match,
lighting a candle
forever,
as my soul's guiding light"
Love it.
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awww, this is abs. beautiful papa, i think you are getting better and better and you were alread so good
lol...but i really like this alot, and good luck
Stephanie ♥
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wow a beautiful poem with some very deep beautiful imagery on the refletions of a peaceful light I loved all of your words in this poem they touch the readers soul with some beautiful grace good luck in the contest
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short but oh so sweet. Good job
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oh.. i love this... to be that match igniting a light and guiding in love forever... *sigh*
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