A brainstorm, a lightning bolt
the ideas begin to flow
a strong surge and creative jolt
blends passions with the words I know
Pen in hand, words are designed
the ink glides across the page
brings life to line after line
most important tool at this stage
Lines in rows, deep thoughts expressed
Patterns of feelings and dreams
Treasured emotions aren't suppressed
They're drawn out in numerous themes
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Sometimes it feels as good as sitting in the window catching the warm suns rays whislt sitting in a cold dim room.
-cheers
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A very elegant write ! 'Tis awe inspiring
and insights - delight !! love it ...
Best wishes ! Friend Easy
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liked it
feels i like im right there as you wrote this...
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this is lovely both in rhyme and expression. it seems to have come out Very smoothly! if only every poem spoke itself so clearly!
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Very well rhymed and detailed throughout...it's very exciting when you get ideas like that
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lovely theme about capturing an idea that hits you and pushing it as big as you can lovely
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Nice one
Every writer should love this....brainstorming while describing a brainstorm!
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Great lines, awesome subject, but it sounds and reads too mechanical, without any emotion.
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The essence of writing is right here captured in well articulated prose. Well structured and fluent rhyme and meter. Great work.
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This is good too... I like it alot.... Your Friend in Poetry... JackReed3...
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awesome! Very clearly conveyed, a very enjoyable read!
Phrozen
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Brillient i poems about writing poems you really captured that excitement of the creating itself
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it stole my heart icon
its suppose to say i love poems about writing poems 
icon thief
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This is a beautiful expression of the creative thing we like to call writing...the muse hits like a lightning bolt and does send a surge of energy through the body and pours out in ink...love this one...
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This Is a great read and describes almost how to write a poem great job hun
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Very nice. Nice rhythm and nice detail
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I like it, its good
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Very descriptive flowing with intensity from the first line
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Very nice way to describe the feeling of inspiration. When a muse alights on your shoulder it's like finally awakening from a long dream. I particularly liked lines 7 & 8. Good job.
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Outstanding Anya...you clever, clever, woman! Innovative, and with flare. This is an instant fav...love the title too!
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Painless
One of the few I have seen.
Poetry at its best.
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once again allot of rhyming...i do it allot also though, so its hard to critique it,
i loved the last two lines tho
"Treasured emotions aren't suppressed
They're drawn out in numerous themes" -
you are a real. This write betrays you as a real poetess. Keep up the lovely work
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still don't get this one?
A rapturous vision,
An epiphany,
Makes me realise,
How powerful words can be.
A blank sheet, new words to find,
Fear, hate, love or rage?
Bring life to each and every line,
Discover truth in every page.
Lines in rows, deep thoughts expressed,
Patterns of feelings and dreams,
Memories borne of times depressed,
Diluted silently in screams.
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hmmmm
What was the topic? -
and i don't understand wat ur getting at, is english your first language? lol
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Is English her first language lol xx, was parenting your parents choice?
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i wasn't commenting on the peot stranger, but a commenter, but how couldyou know. So i will not take offense this once, you get one warning with me, and then....
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one warning?
I like all Anya's stuff. I thought you were asking "is english your first language" to her, which offended me. Anya is far better than many on here.
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its not nice to yell summertempest
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I THINK YOU CAN CANTRAST THE FEELING.
IN THE FIRST HALF YOU CAN WRITE ABOUT HOW A THUNDER STORM LIKE BOLT OF LIGHTENING CREATES A POEM
AND IN THE NEXT HALF YOU CAN HOW SUBTLE SIMPLE IDEAS COME TO YOU WHEN YOU CLOSE TO SAY NATURE.
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unfortunatly for you it is still way better than most, so your gonna get more lovers than haters!
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not bad
Seems more of a statement of obvious fact, you paint a strong picture, but that last line is definatly your hook, this poem is a skeleton that needs more flesh, you told me what i know, now fill it in with what i don't. 2nd line has double plural, which i'm not fond of.
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lol im sorry i ment good one
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god one
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A good poem of how poems come to be.Thank you for your comments, Carl.
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The flow in this is amzing its like a blue print of someone writting poetry keep it up
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Wow this is awesome poem Anyajoellienne.
sounds well good rhyming work also
it expresses the way of writing.
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Great poem Anya I can never seem to capture stuff like this. Good job.
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A grand poem to combine a mixture of things. Of course it was the first line/title that brought me in here. Nicely done with your pen.
Ted E
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Very beautiful poem Jack. Take care Sweetheart.
love, Catie+
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That was Awsome... your friend in poetry... JackReed3...
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Hmm nicely simple.
I liked it.
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an abstract but somehow clear visual depicting life. I like it.
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Very existential theme. Thematically it reminds me of some stuff I have, though stylistically we're worlds apart. All in all, a great description of the creative process.
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great
i love the way this is worded, and its not a topic i usually see, guess i can thank michael for that part, but you are the one who brought life to it, good job, glad you arent nervous about posting anymore, keep writing
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very nice anya...its a lovely poem!
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me likies! im very aware on how i spelt that lolz. great job anya i love thee way u said "the ink glides, across the page, brings life to line after line, most important tool at this stage".
*hugs* tay.
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Hello Anya
This is a very nice poem and expresses your thoughts beautifully - Line 6 - perhaps the word "ink" could be replaced - the rhyme and flow are great - keep on keeping on young lady - Bless God - Joe ----------------- hugs
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hmm interesting, it's odd how this is a description of a description really, a poem in the poem, really if you think about it it's a never ending thought, like a mirror in a mirror, the act of writing about the poem you're writing, i do like the kind of time capture here, as far as it goes, it was bland, it flowed nicely and the rhyme was very well done, very subtle, but it was boring to read, and didnt kick up too much emotion either. still other than that it's kind of a neat mind trip to examine, and i always appreciate that.
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lovely, its like a poem in a poem too cuz its the idea of a poem as a poem
WTG!
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