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[ Heaven's got ]

Heaven's got

an inkblot entryway

and tile a mile wide.

I know,

I saw it with eyes of my own

less than two months ago.

 

25 years to stumble through the door

once inside I felt I'd spent my whole life

losing grip down a long trip.

An angel of mercy to catch my fall,

bring me up with beautiful lips.

Lift my heart with a laugh

and ease me down to bed

by her side.

 

A seamstress with a steady hand

to stitch back my shattered soul.

Perfect beauty wrapped in lace

who never fails to amaze.

I know an angel who plans to escape

under a wall and through three states

She's got a heart that beats for me

A solid spirirt, and aluminum wings.

 

Matter of fact,

I'm afraid I've lied

Heaven's got

fiery hair of sunset tones

and a beautiful mile wide smile.

 

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  • Bean Sidhe silver member
    August 23

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    X.X.X.

    I love the beginning of this one. Unusual for you beginning to resonate as strongly as normally, it is your ending that blows me away. The imagery portrayed here is top notch - although I am going to have to speak to Mr Forte about giving away all my secrets!! I love this. Thank you, darling. And your AN is quite true - only six remain and they couldn't go by fast enough. Loves

  • robforte
    August 22

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    you're done.

    "Heaven's got

    fiery hair of sunset tones

    and a beautiful mile wide smile.
    "

    sounds like there's no coming back from this for you.
    enjoy the ride!
    she's a doozy (but in a great way)


    this write is AWESOME!!!