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Tomorrow

Some times, I just wanna cry.
When I hear you're out tonight.
Knowing you could die tonight.
You don't give a damn, you're high tonight.

The world is your playground tonight.
Won't remember shit about tonight.
Fuck 'em all, you're gonna snort some tonight.
Don't give a damn, this is your night

This is where I cry tonight
Watching you die tonight
Snort that white lie tonight
I know you won't see tomorrow night

Agony is my hand tonight
I can't keep a poker face tonight
Screw this shit tonight
I don't want to be your bitch tonight

Author notes

For Jesse.

With no love.

Only fear.

Die young Jesse.

Save yourself from yourself.

Yes....

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  • meghannicolesmiles
    September 5, 2008
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    That was really good(:


  • Child of Water
    August 23, 2008

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    By far the line "snort that white lie tonight" is my favorite. It's a really strong line that holds alot of emotion about what this poem is saying.
    I hope that this person you are writing about realizes that their life is worth living.
    Best wishes.

  • mightyafrowhitey
    August 22, 2008
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    I like it. It's a great poem and you're a great person.