This relationship is heading
straight into no where...
frequent games
distracting the mind-
trying,
as you catch me off gaurd.
and you laugh....
i envy your happiness,
you have no idea...
as you flaunt it daily...
the freedom of 'you'.
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Those who tease loves tender tears of senualality
End up on the end of agressions hit list,
I liked this poem alot, It pacts a punch deep into the soul of a bleeding heart and delivers a dagger into the lost souls of those who try and move on brilliantly penned....
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well?...............
I read through this poem 3 times! Sorry, but to me, it seems like it's missing something! Sort of felt like your mind was wandering a bit when you wrote it. Maybe I just don't understand what meaning you were trying to get across. Don't mean to be critical. Just don't get it. Sorry
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its ok. thoughts have been off alot lately. this was just a quick thought. but i thank you for your honesty. its hard to find on ap.
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Great piece
Yes within love we so tease and often bring a smile where worry lies and we embrace for life is turned back to a time of joy
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