Batrachian King
Desolate, mourning lost love
Chance lost to wet feet
A contest entry
- F...is for frog! by DogFish.
400 points, ended August 29, 2008, 20 entries
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these are very beautiful words. i like the image here. it is sad yet powerful. great job and good luck in the contest!!
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Singing fairytale in key of haiku -- words woven powerfully uniting eastern form with theme & character of western folklore...
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This is a fantastic piece....very clever too!
The first line was just killer....gives off a very humourous feel to the poem, as if your are funnying the poor frog's plight! Supercool!
LOL...."wet feet"
You have aced this, whichever way I see it!
peace.
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F is for Fabulous
Vito
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F is for Fantastic!
what a creative little haiku
this is Love, Lane
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A very nice twist on the fairy tale!
Extra points for spinnig your story using the word "Batrachian"!
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i like this, its intrsting and different
good luck and take care
Stephanie ♥ -
I really like the addition of the technical name in this piece very nice haiku! I really like the wistful air of this poem - you capture the feeling perfectly - best of luck in the contest!
Keep writing
Polly
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