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Ribbit

The frog slowly sighed 

Inhaled and uttered a croak
What a sour note

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  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    August 26, 2008

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    Laughably Cute

    I like the last line. It made me ! I am in love with frogs. I actually collect the little critters. Perfect Haiku. Loved it from beginning to end. Thanks for sharing your work with me. mandie


  • PatheticKt
    August 25, 2008
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    Hehe, cute moment and the last line was humorous at that
    Good luck in the contest ^^


  • DogFish silver member
    August 24, 2008
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    What a sweet distilation of the moment!


  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 23, 2008
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    this is too cute and awesome
    great job and good luck
    Stephanie ♥


  • Polaja Greeters member
    August 23, 2008

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    I really like the way you have described the frog so well - it makes me wonder what it is thinking certainly the frog in the picture looks like it would be sour! Good luck in the contest!

    Keep writing

    Polly

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