Rose scented candles
aromatic enticement
weakens defenses
sultry steam rises
anticipation bubbles
sliding down under
passionate kisses
dreams are startled by yanking
mouth to mouth now ends
Author notes
Double Tanka - Triple Haiku
Something Beautiful
Sorry the dream had to end 
A contest entry
- Double Tanka - Triple Haiku Something Beautiful by InBetweenThoughts.
1000 points, ended September 25, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Three's a crowd, get your own tub of fun
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Love that title, what man wouldnt
not sure on the structure of a double Tanka , triple Haiku, so will say that I enjoyed this, definitely painted a picture in my mind 
good luck in your contest
Rob
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Of course what man wouldn't?? Thank you Rob for your comment for I was planning just that,to paint a picture in the mind of many
So what was your picture??
I didn't know you blushed, boy that was easy lol
Thanks
Des
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well I was MOST concerned that one of you ladies may hurt yourself getting in and out of that hot tub,what with all those suds and the splashing and what not so thought I would offer to hold the towels
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of course you may hold the towels
It would be better if you JUMPED right in and joined the splishing and splashing instead of being a bystander, what do you think? lol
Thank you for the concern, you are so very sweet and thoughtful
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SPLASH !!!
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LMAO How did I know you would do that????
LOL
Enjoy sssssssssss
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Thanks Linda I hope so! lol
Des
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You are funny Excellent haiku in form and nature along with a bit of sensual innuendo to boot! Love it!
I am sure the contest holder will definitely enjoy the dreameven though it had to end lol
All my best to you in the contest!
Linda
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