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until were as natural as breathing

I’ve never known   how to quite say “I love you” but at this very moment I’ve never felt better
I’m Putting all of my heart into you & me
Breath in breath out into a heart and sole long gone dead
Until we are as natural as breathing I’ll never give up on US
With every day that passes and I wake up next to you and know this is how it should be

does it suck? (tell the truth)

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  • Glenn
    August 29
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    yes! it does sucks


    • pukingrainbows
      August 31
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      um thanks i think.i'm not really sure what to say you gave me three applause but said it sucked oh well thanks for commenting anyway

  • LittlexxMissxxEmo
    August 22
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    Simple. Emotional. Beautiful.

    Keep up the wicked writes

    = ) xo

    • pukingrainbows
      August 24
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      thanks i can't write much my siter is being bothersome but thank you for the comment this was one of those is one of those poems that you just wrote and wished you'd get a comment so thanks
      -monica