Has dawn arrived to early
my head is still spinning,
World is smiling…
Knock came late last night,
feeling the weakness in my knees.
Why must the world go on?
Author notes
Prompt Dawn
A contest entry
- Quickie...................... 15/30/24 Word Prompt PIF by fortyninereasons.
875 points, ended August 27, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Short, but interesting piece left open for the readers interpretation.
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This piece made me feel sad, but I did enjoy reading it. Thank you for your entry.
Juls
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Very interesting write you have penned here... You really had me thinking.
Very deep write, and deeper imagery in so few lines
Very well done
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Good luck in the contest. You have a lot of imagery in these few lines.
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this is very good. i feel desperation and sadness in it, at the same time. great poem! i hope it wins!!
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it always must go on
i love you gran
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