Oh my precious son, it's me do you remember?
All those years writing in the sand through September.
Raising you here all your life on the beach,
now you have died so young and are so out of reach.
Although you are not physically here,
my love note written in the sand is for you my dear.
I love you is something we have always shared,
such a beautiful memory because we both cared.
Written by: Kelle Marie Stavron
August 22, 2008
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Oh And I Read The Rules!!!
So special since my son was 5 days old until the age of 24 and only 2 weeks before he died we were on the beach playing!! This picture brought back to me so many beautiful memories. Thank you for sharing this with me.
A contest entry
- Pic Prompt Yay!! COME SEE!!! by BeautifullyBroken42.
450 points, ended September 8, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow Reading YOUR poem brought me, memories of my dead brother, he died with 25 years (8 years ago). I can't say that I feel your pain, because the pain of a mother losing a son isn't the same as losing a brother. I can say its worse to lose a son, I can tell this cause I've been there with my mother, when my brother died.. She isn't the same anymore, though she looks normal, I know she still feels the pain, and so do I... love takes time to heal, but losing a close person doesn't heal never it just minimize but never go away...
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Such a touching poem! I enjoyed reading this entry, it's different then all the others. (well that i have looked over) Thank you so much for entering. I'm sorry for your loss. God bless him. Good luck.
Just a quick note. Take another look at the rules. Well just #2. None the less this was a beautiful poem! -
Such lovely memories you must have of your times spent at the beach! Another touching write sis.. you always share your heart and emotions so openly and I love that about you!
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You did a beautiful job with this dear. Good luck in the contest...
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So Beautiful
Your love for your son can be felt in every word of your poem. There is always a special bond between mother and son just as there is between father and daughter. It goes deep in the heart and no other feeling is more beautiful then the feeling it gives us. And nothing, no not even death, can take that beautiful feeling away from us. Bless you my friend. May prayers and God's love keep uplifting you. God Bless you my friend
Love,
Sandy
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Kelle, the love you two shared, there isn't a day in heaven that he doesn't remember you and everything you and he had between you..That love never dies...A love of a mother and her child. I am sure he wants to hug you, and do all the things he did on earth for you. I pray you would feel that love today, and every day..He awaits your reunion with him in heaven, dear..What a reunion it will be...Such a touching poem....Magnificently written!
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He Remembers!!!!
Kelle he does remember I am sure of that and what a special bond the two of you shared, as you were such a loving mother and brought out the best in him...you raised him well and he loves you so much right down from Heaven now and I am sure he is awaiting that reunion of his whole family and what a glorious day that will be....Wonderful beauty here hon...Thanks for sharing...Much Love!!!~~Toni~~
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Simply wonderful memories sis! What a tender loving flare you added to the pic!
Miss ya bunches,
Frogz~
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A sweet and precious poem, so full of sentimental love and memories. A beautiful memory for sure.
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Sis,
This is gorgeous!! You said a lot in this short piece! and I know without a doubt that Matt remembers! Don't ask me how I know, but trust me, I know. That is a treasured memory, that will comfort you when you need it the most. This is truly heartwarming!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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