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Precious Moments

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promise of love
goes without question,
cradled in binds of devotion
time cannot untie.

precious moments
written by blessing's hand,
fills pages of life unfolding.

tenderly I hold you
forever close to my heart,
protecting you always...
in a mother's love.

 

 

 

Author notes

http://manips-of-artist2.deviantart.com/art/BOOK-OF-DREAMS-II-95569856
(blah, my muse choked, but the pic looks like maybe she's expecting..sooo that's where I took it)

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    August 24, 2008
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    How beautiful!! I can definitely see how you got this!
    I love it!


    • Carolina Moon gold member
      August 24, 2008
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      Thank you for Bronze sis and the nice comment. It's the first thing I thought when I saw the pic. Glad you liked it


  • LadyDementia gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    Oh wow...stunning piece. I really do like the take here, not what I expected to read at all. A beautiful poem, superbly penned. Thanks for entering and good luck

    • Carolina Moon gold member
      August 24, 2008
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      Thank you for the lovely comment, I'm glad you enjoyed where I took the prompt


  • justgot2loveme
    August 22, 2008

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    In a Mothers love,
    nothing like it, in the world.
    Your poem is truly very beautiful.
    So sweet and tender, I enjoyed it a lot.

    Justgot2loveme

    • Carolina Moon gold member
      August 22, 2008
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      Thank you. That's very kind of you..I'm glad you enjoyed it.

      Linda


  • KayJay
    August 22, 2008

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    LOL I saw the "bulge" going the other direction This is a soft and gentle take... not obvious and very creative... I think you did a wonderful write here... Well done!

    Ken

    • Carolina Moon gold member
      August 22, 2008
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      LMAO Get outta the gutter big guy lol It's a sweet thought I had mister


  • StarEyes
    August 22, 2008

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    Hey Sis,

    Till that last line, I thought this was going somewhere else My "oops" guess she got me this time

    Seriously though, I love this! What a great job you did on this one!!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


    • Carolina Moon gold member
      August 22, 2008
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      I saw her as -motherly- in the pic..doesn't it look that way to you? Thank you again for your kindness sweet one.

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