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"Everytime You Break My Heart"

Verse: Last night you came to me
And whispered all the words I've longed to hear
But this morning when I looked your way
All I could see were the memories
Of all the nights you stole my heart
Then left me crying all alone in the dark

Chorus: Every time you come around
My defenses tumble to the ground
My heart starts to race, then my mind goes blank
Before I know it, it's too late
You've had enough, you've had your fun
Every time I let down my guard
And every time you break my heart

Verse: I know there's someone else

And I know you'd never betray her trust

So I'll go on living for each night

When I'll fall asleep and dream of us

Knowing soon I'll get out of bed

And live another day with you in my head

 

(repeat chorus)

 

Bridge: Though every night in my dreams

You've just what I need

It never seems to last for long

'Cause by the morning light you're always gone

 

(repeat chorus)

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  • ladybug.
    June 23

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    Again, I don't usually go for lyrics, but these change my mind completely. I loved the meaning & emotion put behind the words. Thanks for sharing.


  • Shannon62875
    March 30

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    WOW!! This is very good... i loved it... You Went all out with the rhyming verses and then the not rhyming ones.. i really like that!! Keep up the great work and good luck in my contest!!

    Shannon*Leah


  • stargardt13
    March 24

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    wow this is a very very good song! im sure many people can relate to this as much as i do. It seems every night the one guy i fell for the hardest is in them. Thanks for entering my contest.


  • dustytiger
    March 5

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    you are one heck of lyricist i love this song too, you have a way with writing emotions and writing them into what i'm sure are some beautiful songs, once again best of luck in the contest


  • upperworld06
    March 3
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    reminds me a bit of Imagine You, what with the whole dream theam, again, great job = P


  • peregrin
    September 21, 2008
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    Magical.
    I love it!
    It is very well written.
    Thanks for the entry!


  • eatingupyourmind
    September 18, 2008

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    awh your writing always impresses me,
    this is so sad, i can really feel these emotions,
    i know this a bit different, but this song reminded me off this guy i used to know. He lived far away but he was never out of my mind. When i saw him i was just so overwhelmed and i was always upset when he left.. and yeah and then he had someo one else. This song reminded me off that.


  • Rovingone gold member
    September 10, 2008

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    This is classic. Just the sort of story you read in romance or hear on late night radio, all about the ones who done us wrong, living with another and keeping stringing us along. So well portrayed in your words.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    September 4, 2008

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    This is a sad write

    I know often some men whispers the sweetest things and betrays womens hearts .The spill love out of their mouths as though it were just another breath to take only they if they were yours to keep would be out with another while you weap .So sad so sad


  • sinner-
    August 31, 2008
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    This poem gives meaning (dare I say) to your ap name, its a beautifull & sentimental write.


  • darlintlc silver member
    August 29, 2008

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    I could really see this as a country song...maybe a few more verses but the feelings there that others could relate to and that's what country music's about!

    favorite lines:

    "Every time you come around my defenses tumble to the ground"

    "When I'll fall asleep and dream of us knowing soon I'll get out of bed and live another day with you in my head"

    Great job!
    darlintlc


  • MyLadysKnight
    August 22, 2008

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    I like this poem very much. I understan the words and sentiment as I have written similar poems. Feeling alone is a terrible feeling.

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