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The Chase

you say that you need me
but you date someone else
you say that you love me
but you ignore me
you say you care
but when I need you
your not there
you love the chase
but the second
you get what you were chasing
you don't want it

How did I do? How does this poem relate to you? What changes would you make?

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  • Immortalbeauty
    August 23

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    "you say that you need me
    but you date someone else
    you say that you love me
    but you ignore me
    you say you care
    but when I need you
    your not there "

    this part relates best to me in more ways then I've ever known.
    Very good!!!